Gold Jesus Rings

So I wrote this poem and I’m not sure about punction? please help?

Heaven
This world is not our permanent dwelling
We have a better home beyond the sky
A place where there’s no misunderstanding
Where the river of life never runs dry
A land of joy, peace, and wonderful light
Where love abides and there cometh no night
A city with streets paved of purest gold
Where with the ransomed we’ll live I am told
Where the angels are so sweetly singing,
Sweet chords from their golden harps are ringing
A place with no grief, pain, sickness, or death
Where charming roses forever will bloom
We shall see Jesus, O praise his dear name
For eternity we will reign with him
All through the ages his grace we’ll proclaim

Like I am clueless & let me know what you think about it?
Let me know if you like the poem. I worked really hard on it. by the way it’s Iambic Pentameter ( has 10 syllables per line)

You need to do some reading about meter in general and about iambic pentameter in particular. There’s lots of information available online. Ten syllables per line isn’t what iambic pentameter is all about. There has to be a regular pattern of unstressed and stressed syllables. Line 2 is the only line of iambic pentameter in your poem.

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