Telugu Jesus Songs

Please, can you rectify any grammatical error’s in this para?

i translated this para to english from my native language Telugu.

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Once in Amercia, a rich man searched for buying a very valuable Chirstmas Gift for his mother. At last, he finds a rare African bird which says above 400 words and can sing 40 songs which is worth of 1lac dollars.After the Christmas celebration, he enquired his mother by phone that how’s his gift.
She responded to her dear son that the bird tasted very good.

God of the God gave us the most Valuable gift Jesus Christ to the Human being world. No one has questioned about the History of Jesus Christ who made the Human history into two part’s. No one can disagree that Jesus has came to visit this world.But it’s a good news to those people who had had Peace,Love, Sin Forgiving and those who had invited him as thier protector. This Beautiful Message is stated by Luka 3:1, 2 in the Bible.

I filled in some gaps to clarify what happened; the events seemed to occur rather abruptly. It isn’t exactly a global revision; just a little additional detail to agree with the events.

Once upon a time in America, a wealthy man went in a search to purchase a valuable Christmas present for his mother. After a long search, he eventually discovered a rare African bird, which was capable of many things, ranging from speaking over four hundred words to singing forty melodies. Pleased with his finding, he immediately purchased it and rushed back home in time for a Christmas celebration, where he would present his gift to his mother. After the Christmas celebration, he returned home, where he phoned his mother and inquired about his gift. She responded to him by saying that she was pleased with his gift; the bird was delicious.

“The most Highest Being, God, presented mankind with an invaluable gift – Jesus Christ. No one has ever questioned the history of Jesus Christ, though He had separated mankind’s history into two different epochs; no one can argue that Jesus Christ had visited Earth in a mortal form. However, mankind rejoices, for those who accepted Him as their protector were granted Peace, Love, and forgiveness from their sins.” This edited message is from the Bible in Luke 3:1-2.

Note: “edited” was added before the word “message” because if it’s from the Bible, then the only way to get the original quote is by copying it directly from a Bible in Luke 3:1-2. Otherwise, this is merely an edited form of your para.

Hope it helped.

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